Surprise : Jay Hart is our narrator for the time being. Also, welcome back the Yesterday. About time it made an appearance.
Been working on lighting and atmosphere with these first few pages. Think i'm improving. At the very least, i'm better than I used to be - so there's that.
Hope you enjoy!
~Marshall
Hm, I have a feeling this chapter is going to be more about him.
He seems to have a motive even though it seemed like Alice freed him from the capsule by coincidence and he just tagged along.
Yeah, both of them have kind of been drifting for the past while, either by choice or by random chance, but they're starting to get involved in the world. Hence Kate "changing things".
This chapter's definitely going to get more into Jay - but it kind of digs into the two of them as a pair as well.
I'm really having fun doing it up actually, it's fun to just kind of explore stuff and have fun with the way the story's told :D
No complaints!
I love exploring a pair when it is not the usual hero and sidekick thing which in your case is not :)
Jay is straightforward and stubborn while Alice is random and stubborn. I guess?
I like that and this will be great :D
Looks homey with the clothesline. Alice looks so mysterious coming out of the shadows.
Home is where ya make it! Even if it's a broken down space ship in the middle of the desert, got to add those homey touches haha.
I don't believe that's Alice's silhouette until it's proven.
It's Schrodinger's silhouette. It's both Alice and not Alice until it gets lit up.
Omg! How did I miss this update? D:
I love the fire lighting in this page it's so pretty! Aaaand.. I'm REALly curious about what she's thinkin about. (IsitbadthatIstilltotallyshipAliceXJay?>__>)
Omg! How did I miss this update? D:
I love the fire lighting in this page it's so pretty! Aaaand.. I'm REALly curious about what she's thinkin about. (IsitbadthatIstilltotallyshipAliceXJay?>__>)
Thank you!!! The next couple of pages are fiery and light-ey and such too :) been enjoying trying to get lighting to work better.
And no, not wrong to ship them. Believe me, nobody ships everyone, everywhere, harder than I, hahaha.
Why thank you! Takes me waaay to long to draw, haha. Got to get better at it, especially if eventually it's gonna be flying around doing ship things, hehe.
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