Episode 2 - Page 25
posted 22nd Mar 2015, 9:30 AM
22nd Mar 2015, 9:30 AM
mars
I very much enjoyed drawing this page. The drama! I'll let it speak for itself instead of rambling on, but I hope you enjoy it as much as I! :)
Anyways, Patreon plug time. Check it out if you feel like supporting me with your money and help pay off my way over-budget new computer, haha.
Regardless though, thanks sooo much for checking out my stuff. As always, it means a lot to me! This little arc is only a few more pages long (hope it hasn't stretched on TOO long haha) and then goes into different areas and such.
Ok, i'm off! Remember to vote on TopWebComics to see a new promo pic of Alice.
Peace!
-Marshall
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22nd Mar 2015, 9:07 PM
mars
Poor Alice, always standing on the sidelines. Going to have to do something before she gets eclipsed by Kate!
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22nd Mar 2015, 1:47 PM
HeSerpenty
The drama IS wonderful in this page! (JayiskindareallyhotinthatfirstpanelokaysorryI'llshutupandgoodluckreadingthislololol)
Great dialogue as usual! Great composition, great suspense, and... I can't help but think Alice might be a taaad bit jealous maybe in that last panel?
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22nd Mar 2015, 8:24 PM
mars
Oooh why thank you :)
I was curious/nervous as to how this page would turn out as it's different/somewhat more intimate than i've done before... and I was didn't want it to come across corny or forced, hah.
So your awesome feedback is really appreciated :) :) :)
Also...
Is it even possible not to look smokin' hot in a tactfully torn shirt like that? ;)
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22nd Mar 2015, 2:34 PM
TheD-Wrek
Beautiful page again! That last panel, that look... perfect. :D
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22nd Mar 2015, 8:45 PM
mars
Thank you so much!! ^_^
I'm glad that last panel seems to be getting its subtle impact across :)
I fiddled with it for quite a while trying to get it to convey what I wanted it to without being too on the point or missing the point entirely, haha. Freakin' tightrope to walk ^_^
Always the simple things that are the hardest to draw, hah! So i'm super glad you like ^_^
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22nd Mar 2015, 4:12 PM
CCG
Great page, like both the art and the cleverness of the plot. I think alice looks a little sad rather than jealous, as though she's failed to really understand the major herself too.
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22nd Mar 2015, 8:37 PM
mars
Thanks!!!
Yup... there's a mixture of emotions going on, for sure. She's got some thinking to do when this is all over... although calmly sorting out her mind isn't really Alice's strong suit.
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23rd Mar 2015, 8:34 AM
quetzlsacatanango
Thinking that you understand a woman surely cometh before a fall.
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24th Mar 2015, 5:09 PM
Aetrun
The understanding I have figured out, it's the predicting that I can't get the hang of.
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23rd Mar 2015, 9:48 AM
Hornet
Hmm, Wonder if kissing Kate would count as literally kissing the body electric?
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25th Mar 2015, 8:33 AM
JustNoPoint
This page is stunning. The art, layout, and emotional undertones are absolutely done perfectly.
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