Episode 4 - Page 20
posted 6th Sep 2021, 10:18 AM
6th Sep 2021, 10:18 AM
mars
That girl has no chill.
Though to be fair, she's not exactly hidden her feelings on the whole 'win at any cost' schtick, and being behind enemy lines with no radio (thanks to Alice) doesn't help an already stressful situation!
At any rate, no love lost here.
New page next weekend, stay tuned!
And thanks for keepin' at it with the checkin' in :D
~M
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6th Sep 2021, 12:34 PM
Allzephyr
Seems that killing a person's comrades really does leave a bad first impression. Not that she's made any better ones since...
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7th Sep 2021, 9:06 AM
mars
Yeah, there will probably have to be a few in-between chapters before we reach the point where they all sit down and have a laugh over tea, haha.
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6th Sep 2021, 1:30 PM
Weiser
Why can't I get rid of the feeling that the next surprise is about to be on the next page?
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7th Sep 2021, 9:16 AM
mars
It's like in a movie, when someone's about to get into a car crash, and you somehow just KNOW shit's about to go down and you are all tense and ready and then BAM.
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7th Sep 2021, 2:58 PM
Thracecius
Alice, for once I think you should leave this one alone. Anna may be cold and calculating here, but given her past experiences and the current situation, I don't think anyone can really blame her. Not an excuse for her behavior, but at least she is being honest and she is making an effort to explain, even if there's a razor sharp edge to it. Sometimes you just have to take what you get and move on.
Great page, Mars! It's good to get some background on our no-nonsense, "Hot Topic" freedom fighter. :)
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7th Sep 2021, 6:35 PM
mars
Alice has become too spoiled with how easy it is giving Jay a hard time, she's not used to someone who snaps back.
Oh well, some great relationships can start out with a crappy first date, right??
And also thanks ^_^ Glad you're enjoying :D Always love your comments!
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8th Sep 2021, 10:22 AM
Thracecius
I can't speak to the great relationships starting out with a crappy first date, I don't have that experience, so I'll take your word for it. ;)
Thanks for the response! I always enjoy your commentary and responses and I try to return the favor, so you're welcome. :)
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9th Sep 2021, 10:10 AM
mars
:O Well, don't let Alice hear you say that!
Next thing you know, we'll have a full fledged pinup-war on our hands :P
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