Episode 4 - Page 18
posted 15th Aug 2021, 9:08 AM
15th Aug 2021, 9:08 AM
mars
She'll be sore in the morning!
SO what have we learned here? Jay has a no kill policy? Not quite, but we'll get to that later.
The really important thing is that Alice has to up her game, lest she continue to play second fiddle and get repeatedly body slammed, verbally at least (Well, maybe more if she keeps pushing her luck)
Anyways, enjoy! Next page up next week
-M
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15th Aug 2021, 9:28 AM
jamie59
The girl is really limber. Bet she can lock her ankles behind her head too. That might distract Jay.
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16th Aug 2021, 3:21 PM
mars
The next chapter is just 20 pages of her doing Yoga, so should be educational at least
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16th Aug 2021, 10:09 AM
Thracecius
Has Alice gotten thinner, or is it just me? I'm not saying she looked heavy or anything, just that she seemed...curvier?...before now. It's probably just the perspective being used, I have a tough time with depth perception, so it could be that too. :)
Anyhow, we already know that Jay doesn't have a no kill policy, because he straight-up slaughtered several of the "rebels" on the ship they boarded earlier. Anna may not care about his orders, but you can bet he will and he won't be shy about letting her know. What those consequences will be, I don't know, but I doubt he can afford to sideline her.
Poor Alice is out of her depth here, and as much as I like seeing her blow stuff up with that raygun of hers, I sometimes wonder how it effects her mental and emotional stability when she harms or kills people, even in self-defense. Unlike Jay or Anna, who have training and conditioning for combat, it seems like Alice is basically a normal person trying to deal with unusual situations. The differences between her and Malcolm seem to be less significant than those between him and Jay, even if it doesn't appear to be the case.
Great page again, Mars! I'm really glad you keep it going. :)
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16th Aug 2021, 3:03 PM
mars
She does look a little on the thinner side in that panel
If she's gotten thinner overall, and she probably has compared to earlier art, it's totally due to an evolving art style than anything else haha, not a conscious effort on my part per say. Consistence is haaaard, and I make no claims at being great at it :D
As a canonical note, she's supposed to be on the shorter side, and I try not to draw her super-duper rail thin.
But for the story's sake, constantly being around all these good looking folks on a sunny world, she's gotta keep that beach bod up to speed, so who knows!
And thanks! Happy I've been able to keep a more consistent schedule going. My only wish is that I could draw faster as i've got so many ideas to get out! ^_^ haha
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17th Aug 2021, 10:28 AM
Thracecius
I have no complaints about your art, Mars, I just wanted to make sure I wasn't imagining things. :) I'm well aware that consistency of character design is tough, I see that comment from other artists all the time. She still looks like Alice to me, mostly it's her face and hair that are distinctive, so maybe she's just posing at an angle trying to look thinner, right? ;) As for her being on the shorter side, I have no problem with that at all. ;)
Looking forward to more of your great ideas, because I have a lot of fun seeing them. :D
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19th Aug 2021, 3:48 AM
Max
Anna's thigh strap thingies should be on top in panel one. Went back a few pages to check and find them moving and disappearing page 16 panel 4 and page 15 panels 1,2 and 4. I apologize for the OCD
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19th Aug 2021, 11:05 AM
mars
Noooope don't apologize for the OCD haha, I very much appreciate people noticing/telling me about these things as they drive me crazy too haha
But yeah you're right, it's fucky in those panels for sure. Just keeps teleporting to the front and back haha
Rest assured i'll be going and fixing it all this weekend soon as I get a chance :D
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