Episode 4 - Page 12
posted 31st May 2021, 7:46 PM
31st May 2021, 7:46 PM
mars
NEW EDIT : I tweaked the last page, so the ambushing/soldiers/etc is a lil more visible. Hopefully this makes the pages make a lil more sense.
Edit/Update: So this page/the last page seems to have people somewhat confused.
First up : I accidently posted this page as page13. It's actually 12, and i've revised it accordingly.
Second : on the previous page, Anna says she 'Sees the attackers' but a few people have asked me where they are / said they can't see them. The image of the building has a little sandbagged/boarded up door with some smoke coming out of it - my intention was to have that be where the 'shot' came from (with the smoke being the only indicator of the sneak-attack ambush) but since it's confusing everyone (understandably) i'm going to change it a bit as it's clearly not coming across as I'd hoped :P
Will make changes+update tomorrow. Thanks for the feedback everyone!!
TL;DR : Confusing art on the previous page + sloppily posting the wrong page number = people wondering if there's supposed to be a missing page between this one and last.
There is not, and i'll be tweaking the previous page tomorrow to make things more clear.
Sorry for the wait. But here you go!
Finally someone's using one of the oversized guns they're always hauling around!
Snooze you lose, Alice, next time get quicker on the draw instead of running that mouth off!
More to come! <3
-M
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2nd Jun 2021, 8:17 PM
mars
Update : I tweaked the previous page (added some detail so it is more apparent what Anna is seeing) hopefully this is better and more clear as to what's going on :P
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1st Jun 2021, 2:14 PM
mars
I sloppily posted the page and mis-numbered it. As well as I kind of screwed up the previous page too. I posted an update above and will be clearing things up tomorrow :P
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1st Jun 2021, 8:29 AM
sigpig
Looks like Alice is hiding behind a pair of big guns too...
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1st Jun 2021, 2:17 PM
mars
It's like when Iron Man wears the Hulkbuster armour around his regular armour!
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1st Jun 2021, 10:06 AM
Joe Fonebone
I have studied Page 11 quite intently, and I cannot find any attackers. Where the Hell are they? And Eric is right, where is page 12? We need more large weapon fire, and additional views of Alice's big guns.
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1st Jun 2021, 2:16 PM
mars
I posted an update above and will be clearing things up with the previous page tomorrow :P
You're supposed to see the little smoke trail of the ambush coming out of the building from where they launched their sneak attack, but it's obviously not coming across as I wanted it to hahaha and I get it 100%. So yeah, i'll fix tomorrow :P
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3rd Jun 2021, 9:48 PM
Chaucer59
In the window in a ring of sandbags. The weapon is still glowing at the tip and smoldering.
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5th Jun 2021, 9:26 AM
Joe Fonebone
I thought that sandbag area looked suspicious. Should have put 2&2 together. Thanks for the update.
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