Getting under your skin : Tara can do it.
Looks like Alice is growing wise to the coming storm. Time to bug out before things go nuclear!
And on the artistic front ; I tried a couple new things this page. Chiefly, I wanted to break up the page so that yet another lengthy conversation can remain interesting. So hopefully it all sort of works
Anyways enjoy! I barely got this page done in time :D haha, so I guess I should probably start next week's ASAP eh?!
~M
I like how you're using soft focus on the foreground characters, it really gives it depth!
Thanks!!!
It was kind of a last minute idea I had, and I really thought it made the panels pop. Soooo i'll probably do it some more in the future, haha
Somehow I don't think all of those facts and details matter to Tara ;P
"My right to swing my fist ends just where the other man's nose begins" and all that jazz.
What is even the point of asking a model super soldier?
He had his mission and I doubt he is the kind to question orders, not to mention feels like finding out the version HE believes in. That is already implanted.
I mean so far, Jay seems to fight for his greater good and I guess it happens to be the right choice for now but... Anything can change.
I really like this page, Mars. Your layout and focus remained primarily on Alice, who has no dialogue except her excellent and subtle facial expressions. Her whole appearance is completely relatable as an "I'm not awake enough for this" mood, and really drives home her state of mind. I'm definitely interested in seeing you do more pages in this style. :)
Regarding Tara's arguments, by what we've seen so far she might be right, but I'm not so quick to judge Hart given his past attempts at "no collateral damage".
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