Easy on those 'finger' comments, Major. They're ripe for satire.
Ok! Two things!
One - I did some thinking/looking into it, and i've decided to try a switch from jpeg to png, as the internet seems to say it's better for images. So... this is a png post. If it doesn't work or if it's fucked up somehow/where and you notice - let me know!!
Two - still auctioning THIS[/b], so check it out.
Other than that, enjoy, thanks for checking in, check out my PATREON, and have an awesome week!
~M
The comic looks good!
And a real man knows when to say he is sorry. He is very confident in himself to be able to do that.
This & the previous comic page both appear good.
Impressive curls there Jay.
Take it that green & yellow box is KATE. What is the laptop for?
KATE's facial expression in Panel 5 is perhaps the *most* human I've seen to date. She looks sympathetic and slightly bemused all in one deadpan expression and it is FANTASTIC. Also, I think the Major has been out of cryo too long and he's starting to feel the strain of linear living. Maybe he needs a subscription to the "Linear Living Monthly" e-zine. ;)
I'm really looking forward to how this chapter evolves, because there are so many interesting character elements coming together in just a few pages, and we haven't even gotten to the plot yet!
I think you need to give the picture another auction, with more time. Here are my reasons:
(1) I don't think enough people had a chance to hear about and bid on it.
(2) Most people don't get paid until the end/beginning of the month, and are stretching their money right now.
(3) The above applies to me, too.
That's fair. I'm swamped at work and stuck on a set for the next couple of days for at the moment, but if/when the listing expires (assuming it doesn't get a last minute bid or whatnot) i'll relist it for a longer period. Trial and error :p
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