Episode 2.2 - Page 29
posted 13th Nov 2016, 10:29 AM
13th Nov 2016, 10:29 AM
mars
Nothing wakes you up more than a surprise kick to the face. Or maybe nothing puts you to sleep like that. Whatever the case, here we are.
So what's Alice's next move, hm? We shall see...
Thanks for checking in, everybody :) :) :)
~M
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13th Nov 2016, 12:31 PM
Skweeee
I like how you used and framed "surprise kick to the face" in the narrative. It's an unusual yet extremely effective device to drive the action on this page. I may try this method out. Though, I doubt to as good affect as you've done in your comic.
Well done!
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14th Nov 2016, 2:04 PM
mars
Thanks you guys! It's always a struggle of mine to keep the pacing going, and also have simple actions come across the way they should. I spend more of my time thinking "How would I show that?" then actually thinking about what I want to show, haha. So i'm glad it's coming across alright ^_^
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13th Nov 2016, 1:27 PM
jamie59
Alice uses surprise to her full advantage. Eye patch appears to have expected her?
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14th Nov 2016, 2:05 PM
mars
At this point, it's expected that if there is chaos in the air, Alice is probably set to arrive :P
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13th Nov 2016, 3:43 PM
man in black
Eyepatch may get a surprise kick to the face as well
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14th Nov 2016, 10:18 AM
Thracecius
And now we get to find out what plan Alice & Jay agreed upon up front and personal! :D
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15th Nov 2016, 11:36 AM
Thracecius
Good 'ole Christopher Lloyd; you can count on some of his best lines applying to nearly anything.
"Great Scott!"
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20th Nov 2016, 10:19 AM
defo18
Wow
This is some amazing work
Why are you not published!
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