Episode 2.2 - Page 11
posted 16th May 2016, 6:10 AM
16th May 2016, 6:10 AM
mars
As promised, here is a (slightly delayed) page now that i'm back in town.
So - this page. Hopefully it makes sense, the way it's laid out. I kind of experimented with the dialogue - Jay talking over Alice over the comm and so on - and hopefully it conveys as intended.
However comments on this are greatly appreciated. Clarity is uber important to me :P so I might change it if need be.
Anyways, hope you enjoy! Turns out those missiles weren't quite the regular type.
Prepare for nonsense!
Thanks for checking in ^_^ Remember to SUBSCRIBE if ya haven't already!
~Marshall
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16th May 2016, 7:38 AM
MadJak91
Whoa! Are those like KATE guided mini Kates? :D lmao
She continues to have surprising abilities.
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16th May 2016, 9:30 AM
mars
They're like the mini-bosses you get to fight before you get to deal with the real thing! Everybody loves that!
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16th May 2016, 4:55 PM
jamie59
How many KATEs are there? Alice you really live up to your shirt. Jay's going to go nuts having to deal with your total lack of discipline.
You did a good job showing her babbling nonsense.
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17th May 2016, 6:57 AM
mars
Glad to hear things are clear and make sense ^_^
Poor Jay. Always seems to be surrounded by nonsense and mayhem on all fronts :P
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17th May 2016, 6:58 AM
mars
Thanks so much! :D Was fun to finally do a close up of Jay - he doesn't get enough of them :)
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17th May 2016, 6:59 AM
mars
When she's not out saving the world from anarchy, do you think they make her sweep the chimney and cook for them?
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26th May 2016, 3:01 PM
Thracecius
I hope Jay is a better shot (under the circumstances) than Alice is a pilot. ;)
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